Long comments are love! It always makes me want to reply with a really long one of my own.
Sorry about your coursework...
Your way of describing it is beautiful and so so flattering. I've always found action easier to do than characterisation (my beta says that John shouldn't think. Things go wrong when I make John think) so I'm so so glad that you like both.
I've heard Sebastian referred to as Seb a lot so I kind of went with it. And it was deliberate to try and lull you into liking him a bit and thinking he was just misguided. After all if you guys didn't believe that even a little then how were you supposed to buy John believing it?
Thank you for the comment! Feel free to go on forever ;)
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Date: 2012-01-31 09:22 pm (UTC)Sorry about your coursework...
Your way of describing it is beautiful and so so flattering. I've always found action easier to do than characterisation (my beta says that John shouldn't think. Things go wrong when I make John think) so I'm so so glad that you like both.
I've heard Sebastian referred to as Seb a lot so I kind of went with it. And it was deliberate to try and lull you into liking him a bit and thinking he was just misguided. After all if you guys didn't believe that even a little then how were you supposed to buy John believing it?
Thank you for the comment! Feel free to go on forever ;)