You have potrayed Sebastian refreshingly: he is likeable, popular and cunning, pretending to be a friend with John, when Sherlock is...uh, Sherlock. Not so popular. I cannot wait, how he reveals Seb as the inside man (and who will believe him?) Sebastian is very interesting in John, they have plans for him. And it is not too hard to quess, who is the mastermind behind the new group.
But I never get enough to read, how John kills bad guys for Sherlock...always so entertaining. :D Or Sherlock´s great mind in work... although it is a bit hard sometimes to follow....lol.Oh, and the reference to Doyle´s books, when Sherlock hired a boy to spy for him..that is exactly, what the original Sherlock did in Doyle´s stories.
First I thought, that oh, this is soooo long, but when I started to read, I just wanted to know, what happens next. :) This is very enjoyable to read, and you have been so good with details, so the world after the Event feels very possible. And you have written the characters very well. I cannot wait for your updates.
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Date: 2011-12-29 12:52 am (UTC)But I never get enough to read, how John kills bad guys for Sherlock...always so entertaining. :D Or Sherlock´s great mind in work... although it is a bit hard sometimes to follow....lol.Oh, and the reference to Doyle´s books, when Sherlock hired a boy to spy for him..that is exactly, what the original Sherlock did in Doyle´s stories.
First I thought, that oh, this is soooo long, but when I started to read, I just wanted to know, what happens next. :) This is very enjoyable to read, and you have been so good with details, so the world after the Event feels very possible. And you have written the characters very well. I cannot wait for your updates.